Boy and Dog again

Okay so now I have a script for these guys (well... I've got 20 dot points, 1 per page which forms a story arc) and I was practicing getting the boy how I wanted him. He still doesn't quite look young enough (he's more or less a mute so I wanted him to be a pre-schooler) but he's almost there. I just have to practice drawing him over and over so I can set the pattern.
There's a few more characters to design. This is my first try at a proper graphic story and I still have grave doubts about my inking abilities so if anyone wants to collaborate I am quite willing to give story input and discuss characterisation with the right inker so that this isn't just my own show.